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Soiled by the monstrous whiplash
of her lover’s colossal wrath
and the tail-end of madness
the Muse bows her head
bares the soft slant of her neck
where fine silken nectared tips await
the vulgar imprint
of Mrs Kaburagi’s decrepit hand
I watch the 33 golden suns on her back
meld in a seamless ball of fire
Appalled at such blasphemy
An obvious sundering of reason
And what’s left of sanity-
The Muse succumbs!



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