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I cant go on
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michaelpatrick
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- published: June 12, 2012
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I can't rule
Over what's
Been seen
In lifes
Ever afters
Dream
But I can
Dream about
Her asking
About my sigh
Over her dead
Body cream
She loves me
This I feel
Because she
Is gone and
I cant go on
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