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If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.

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by Fairplay

this is one of the most
relaxing poems i have read in a while. the quiet nature of it overwhelmed me. silence is, indeed, golden.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: June 16, 2012 )

My Error

This was one of two poems waiting for publication...

I then edited them both a little too severely I guess leaving nothing to publish ...

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: June 16, 2012 )

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