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intellectual overload

You can read me if you wish
I wont overload
My writing just explores some junk
picked up along the road

You traveled the same highway
OK.... more besides!
I just tend to tell the truth
not fill it out with lies

So when you see familiar lines
food you ate before
While I quaff the cheapest wine
lying on the floor

The smile will be on my face
down and having fun
Making rules up as I go
all dusted up and done

If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.

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The following comments are for "Intellectual overload"
by Fairplay

Lies and Damn Lies

Thanks Lucie

Everyone has had to cope with lies at some stage

There are none so deaf as those that will not hear

I cope well with lies...... Just Smile

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: June 16, 2012 )

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