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Wanted Dead or Alive

I see dead people every day
quite often it's the norm
They come in many colours
sizes shape and form
Here and there's a live one
escapes this living hell
The tell tale is the smiley face
that lets you know they're well


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If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.


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by Fairplay

More dead than alive



Thanks for looking in and your fine comments Lucie

The dead were in the back of my mind while I was writing, rather like humanity in it's innate form until death crushes out that last vestibule system

Lots of people want the dead, just look around at some married couples

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: May 22, 2012 )





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