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I love you so much
It's hard not having you here;
I miss your tender touch
My heart draws you more near.

I can't love anymore
Filled with past heartbreak & fear
That no one could endure.

My tears are silent
My range of anger stands unclear
No remorse, just tempted with violence.

My eyes are covered with shades
Blocking out the pain, I can't reveal
As I travel through a dark everglade
Hiding what I somewhat I feel.

Absense from you in my heart made me grew fonder
Of my emotions not real
Enough to answer the questions I ponder.

Some things I still can't let go beyond my will
Of what my choices that leaves mysteries to wonder.
Why does drama leave your life to be unrest?

It's the truth that is hard to swallow this pill
Filled with a faithful test
Only God promising his divine best

angellica marie shackelford

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