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I would never forget that expression on your face
When I broke you the Bad News
It put you in an uncomfortable place
Filled together as disgace.

Glances of the flashback
Got to me by chance;
Hurt from the truth I lack
In a crisis during circumstance.

This was considered betrayal of a loved one
Who was seen as a person that does no wrong
By killing his beloved son,
A story left to be unsung
For many generations to come.

angellica marie shackelford

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