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Well you know there was this girl
Who lived on the strip
Spent all her days drinking like some crazy fish
Wishing she’d meet a man to fill all her days
Said she’d go insane without a rich man’s name
Then when she’d drink
She’d blow off some steam
and then take everything to the extreme
But then she’d drink more and just get real mean
All obscene like a reality show queen

There was this guy who lived close by
He lived off the strip
So when he’d see her he’d buy her a drink
He lived in the biggest house way up the hill
Looking over the city living good until
He took her out
And then to his bed
Well life was sweet for her after they wed
But then she’d drink more and just get real mean
All obscene like a reality show queen

Wish this was the end of the story here
But as we all know
See this wasn’t a Hollywood movie
See that rich man was me and that girl was cruel
She took over my life made me this fool
She sure did cost
More than you got
Learned good and hard girls like her cost a lot
But then she’d drink more and just get real mean
All obscene like a reality show queen


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