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It is my birthday,
today, I turned thirty!
Why God? Why do this to me!

Chrispian H. Burks
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by Chrispian

happy birthday :)
Happy Birthday Chris :-) Hope it was better than this poem makes it sound.

Score for the poem: 7/10. (the third line doesn't really work that well, I didn't think - not enough punch.... but you didn't want a critique, did you? :-))

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: July 4, 2003 )

re: birthday
No, it's bee fine. I still resent turning 30.. but It's been fun so far.

No, I wasn't really fishing for a critique ;) .. I was just being silly!

( Posted by: Chrispian [Admin] On: July 4, 2003 )

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