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subtle pink splashes
petals curl around rain drops
wet blooms sweep the streets



fragile pink blossoms
buffeted by breezy gusts
confetti flutters


Penelope Allen
April 21/2012




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"Tigers bloom where there's oodles of room." Zodiac Zoo


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The following comments are for "April 2012"
by Pen

haiku
Of the two i like the second better. The image of strong gusts and confetti go well together.

Bw

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: April 22, 2012 )

@ Brian
My star magnolia is in bloom currently and every Spring it reminds me of the value of haiku. First one was a rainy day - 2nd a breezy one. I suppose there may be one or two more before it's done. It's an absolute beauty of a tree which brings me joy year round.

Thanks for stopping by

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 22, 2012 )

Spring has sprung!
Beautiful images of spring.

Are you going soft on us Pen????? lol

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: April 22, 2012 )

Fret-Free
Who frets the weather...
When it comes with it's own confetti...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 22, 2012 )

thanks to 2
Bea .. I've never denied that I'm susceptible to things that bloom. What causes me grief is when they don't thrive in my care .. unless they are forsythia that needed moving.

whipping - what a wonderful comment ... thank you

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 23, 2012 )

happy Spring..
for inducing smile, thanks

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 26, 2012 )

yo Bobby!
Thanks for dropping in. My front yard rock scape is currently decorated with spent petals and .. I can feel another haiku coming on!

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 27, 2012 )





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