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Tick tock tick
Locks and picks
I need my fix
Of action flicks
Where psycho chicks
Throw flying bricks
At hard-ass pricks
With stones and sticks
For tips and tricks
Of punches, kicks
I click my Bic
In forensics

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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The following comments are for "4N6"
by metrozol

It's Just the Bic in Me
It's better to click it...
Than to flick it...
But then again... it depends on what you're smoking

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 3, 2012 )

It reminds my of an old Blondie song -- can't remember the title right now.


( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: April 18, 2012 )

AWF- It depends on what you're talking about! Flicking sounds nice...

BWOz- I'm pretty sure the song you're thinking of is "Rapture" - "And out comes the men from Mars, they go out at night eating cars, they eat Cadillacs, Lincolns too, Mercurys and Subarus..." Right?

Thank you both for stopping by and commenting, I appreciate your input.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: April 21, 2012 )

Rapture , yes
that's it.

I always liked Blondie, as a pop band, but that song was my fave of theirs.

This reminded me of that in meter/flow.

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: April 23, 2012 )

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