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Society has no right to judge
So do not judge yourself
Regret not what you desire
If it brings true joy to your soul
All people are entitled to happiness
No person has a right to look down upon another
No person has a reason to look down upon their self
A person is not bad on a single decision
Or even multiple decisions
Do not dwell in pity and bitterness
Strive for your hope and wants
Hold no anguish



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The following comments are for "Happiness Regretted "
by Kayame

Unemployment Benefits
It's not our job to judge one another...
And you'll never find God standing
...in the unemployment line

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: April 2, 2012 )

needs some tidying up
As I read this I tumbled over some awkward bits ...

stuff like
Quote:
upon their self

Quote:
bad on a single decision


A noble thought or more but .. well ... it needs some refining.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 17, 2012 )





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