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Two jars were
Sitting on the shelf
One said to the other
I'm bored George
Lets get filled up
On whiskey and water
And some fresh
Picked olives

While the angel below
looks like she
Needs self help
The white cat
Looked up
Wishing she can fly
With the butterflies
That got stuck
At the top
Wondering where
The time goes

Sitting patiently
The beautiful
Fragile eggs
Wait for the roses
To be put in the
Lonely vase

These are her pretties


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The following comments are for "These are her pretties"
by michaelpatrick

once again .. I forgive you
Anyone else who consistently spelled so atrociously would provoke my wrath or ... worse .. my avoidance .. what is it about your writing that makes me so tolerant. It's your way of seeing what others either don't see at all or present it in a less intriguing manner.

it's
pretties .. I think that's what you mean .. it's even worse when the title is askew

Do you mean ... George? ... gah .. I spelled that wrong twice myself ... love the name George so much I persevere ...


you spelled angel correctly and thousands don't

love your Easter? poem!

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: March 30, 2012 )





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