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'Mirror Mirror On The Wall'

There you are
doing the same thing
every time
what are you going to do today
let me guess
because that's what you are good at
ain't you
doing nothing
why must i be hanging here
seeing that ugly face of yours
day in day out
if i could puke
i would have already done it
several times
you friendless moron
nobody likes you
they all just pretend they like you
because they pity you
truth be told
you are boring
through and through
you are a useless ugly
filled with boredom
that is what you are
that is what people think of you
there is not one tiny
bit of excitement in you're life
and you though by going
out have some drinks
meet some people
that it would change
but nnoooo
instead you sat there
looking at the ground
hearing exciting things
happened to people
other people
but not you
because you are boring
people only say to come
and lets have a drink
because they pity you
but all the while they despise you
they hate you
they are ashamed
to sit so close to you
so close to an ugly moron
you don't have friends
because people dint want to be friends
with a thing like you
now why don't you just go away
like forever
because I don't want
you're reflection anymore.


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The following comments are for "Mirror Mirror On The Wall"
by Naijerana

Cliff Hanger
No doubt it's the lack of comments back that does it. Remember the mirror will only talk if you do

If you decide to jump.... take the mirror with you'

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 16, 2012 )

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