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all the pain vanished,
the heart's shadow lit with sun...
the soul's door opened

the night opens up
before me like a regal
road of creation

a young blonde beauty
becomes a Picasso in
white powder sunlight

slice of veg pizza
delicious and gigantic
sustains my body

young Eric Clapton
sings his ode of snorted love;
guitar howls dove-like

fatigue sets in slow,
spiritual exertion
begs for dream-lit sleep

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