Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote all the pain vanished, the heart's shadow lit with sun... the soul's door opened the night opens up before me like a regal road of creation a young blonde beauty becomes a Picasso in white powder sunlight slice of veg pizza delicious and gigantic sustains my body young Eric Clapton sings his ode of snorted love; guitar howls dove-like http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b0k1v49C6hw fatigue sets in slow, spiritual exertion begs for dream-lit sleep

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