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hollow eyed scrag stares
transient window shopping
cart before the horse

Penelope Allen

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"Tigers bloom where there's oodles of room." Zodiac Zoo


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The following comments are for "vagabond"
by Pen

transient window shopping
Just saw the movie The Woman in Black yesterday and I guess that affected my reading of your post. A bit gothic.

Enjoyed.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: February 13, 2012 )

thanks Francisco
It doesn't matter where I am in the world. There's just something that tweaks me when I see a homeless soul window shopping when their worldly goods are stuffed in a shopping cart. It just seems so ... oh .. I don't know .... ironic?

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: February 13, 2012 )

Food for Thought





It would upset me if it was a food shop and they were drooling over the goods.......

Half the stuff I look at in shop windows.... I cant afford.....

On the other hand I have in the past also passed cafe's and eating houses when I have had no money to actually go in...... breath deeply.....and dream

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 12, 2012 )

Very well done!
...more than a sketch, not quite a portrait, but concise and a clear picture.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: March 12, 2012 )

if wishes were horses
There was this fascinating documentary about homeless folks racing shopping carts down dangerous hills around North Vancouver. I guess everyone wants to be a road warrior. Scary stuff for the likes of me.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: March 12, 2012 )

Sequel?
I want to read the poem about you coming upon a homeless, road-warrior, shopping cart race.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: March 13, 2012 )





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