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Brightened in glowed light as immense sunshine
On a weary, hot day;
Waiting anxiously for my valentine
To come to the dance forever and stay;
How my decisive heart was quickly shocked
By the irony in these drastic plans
Caused my bittersweet secrets to become unlocked
Into discussions I couldn’t quite understand;
It was a constant awakening nightmare
For those who wanted to be there
To solve what was going on with me
It seemed so unfair,
Not to pursue my dreams and fulfilling destiny;
That brightened in glowed light as immense sunshine
On a weary, hot day
Waiting anxiously for my valentine.

angellica marie shackelford

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