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head as blank
as a summer chalkboard
or an Arctic mile,
stripped of furniture
stripped of wile
stripped of excessive restraint
stripped of bile

chemical umbrella
artificial May
opioid sunrise
cannabis sativa day
hot coffee rays




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by seanspacey

high
Well I can speak for being high on coffee - must be good coffee. The other stuff if I cared to admit was another world , place , and time. Wonderful piece. Thank you!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: February 26, 2012 )





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