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Long hot days,
Suns rays,
Wind whipped water sprays
Sparkled diamonds on chestnut
Hair.
Slow bikini stare,
Shaded glare,
We two loves pair
On golden sands.
Ink drawn wedding bands,
No voiced demands,
Pink painted nails
On soft white hands
Take me there...


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