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The world is at our feet and all we have to do is take a step into the darkness. But our minds catch us. Our desire falters. We question what it is we want and if it is the right thing to want. Are we going to fail ourselves in the worst way? Striving for a place far ahead in the deep wilderness that we demand to exist and when we reach it, when we bite into that fruit, we realise that it was insignificant and we are surrounded by the weight of our choices and the years of growth that have swept us away.

Remember my friend, despite all you are, all we are, the universe will tick on, long past our departure.

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