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Blue eye cleft chin
silver hair fox run.
Tangles and burrows
half truths and sins.
Again I say.
Lie, daddy, lie.
Tough one dead one
Propaganda Paterfamilias.
Operation Smokescreen.
Lie, daddy, lie.
Wisdom’s no genie
in the bottle nestled.
Ignorant cynic, critic.
Bitter knots vodka shot
fishing boat and line.
Broken,nay, malformed;
grizzled hair and bloated gut.
Deep dug holes
Go on down and lie-
No one’s gonna cry.
Die, daddy, die.

------
Yania Padilla


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