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an elegant death
a year end pose became her
sum up for crossed naughts

for Sylvia
December 31/2011



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"Tigers bloom where there's oodles of room." Zodiac Zoo


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by Pen

Rather sad
... but opulently rich. I loved the last line. Monosyllabic, but it makes one think. It's a beautiful tribute to Sylvia.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: January 1, 2012 )





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