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Waking up is the worst start
The heaviness of remembering
ĎCause sleep is an escape
Pain begins as eyes part

Where have you been?
I can feel you everywhere
I see you down the hall
Canít we just pretend?

Itís my fault, I know
I broke your heart
But mines long gone
Missing from the start

You ruined me
Damaged goods
I had it so good
I couldnít leave

Detox from your words
Getting used to just me
This was a long time coming
Iím not ready

I thought you couldnít do it
I never thought youíd leave
You loved me too much
I still want to believe

Go, start anew
Iíll be here staring
Drenched in jealousy
Waiting for you



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