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Winter comes with sleigh bells ringing,
Winter comes with children singing.
Winter comes with snowmen forming,
Winder comes with early day dawning.

Winter comes with reindeers sleigh,
Winter comes with skies so grey.
Winter comes with presents and trees,
Winter comes with Santa.

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by naomidavies

The Metaphorical Xmas

Haha loved your poem Naomi

It proves that we have managed to keep one tradition alive "The Metaphorical Xmas"

Winter comes with dad up early
Winter Comes round far too quick
eat all that food you will be sick
Xmas comes leaving bills to be paid
Xmas comes it might make you think
who washes up in the kitchen sink
Crimbal comes and you are fine
Crimbal comes go out have fun
leave all the dishes to mum

OK I know .... You have a Dishwasher

we used to have an Amah...

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: December 24, 2011 )

Welcome Naomi
Your poem makes me think of Winters when I was young...Keep writing...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: December 24, 2011 )

Merry Christmas Naomi!
Well don Naomi...have a lovely Christmas Day!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 25, 2011 )

winters day
And the sun shines through a poet's pen on the greyest winters day...

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: December 25, 2011 )

Kacee's Back!!!!
Welcome Back Kacee...hope you're staying awhile...we missed ya.

Merry Christmas!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 26, 2011 )

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