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Rooms full of life supports,
Doctors and nurses were darting in and out,
Beds full of patients,
They came to get a new lease on life
They died, rather killed while asleep
They were lulled forever by toxic fumes
They embraced painful death without any defiance
They all came to the abode of healing only to end on post-mortem table
Their death was untimely,
Not an accident that killed them, it was a careless conspiracy,
They had many places to go, many people to meet, many desires to fulfill,
An inferno put an end to everything,
They never woke up to giggle and stare,
It was their last sleep before they died.

Biplab Das

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