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Give me room to grow
I need some time
in my heart to let you go.
In the middle of the hard climb

Your words was everything
that I put truth in
Something that made my heart sing,
Now my trust became thin

I want you to stay away
I don't want to face my past,
It is best you don't stay
Our relationship can't last.

I'm filled with so much anger
building up from the inside,
You treated me like a stranger,
you misused me and lied.

When I acknowledged how I felt
All you could do was tell me lies
the kind of things to make my heart melt
with much pride.

I felt so deceived,
from what I heard that had me nueve.

I no longer trust you
Your like poison to my veins
Something that will not away
but, became a pain
from now on to continue to stay
that will be overdue.

I'm glad I've won victory
Now I have some kind of peace
that will forever comfort me
in every level of my life at least.

angellica marie shackelford

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