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A soft aroma which brings pleasant memories,
Leafs falling and insects making noises,
A slow walk down a long road,
without a reason but reasoning it.

Iir: Talk to me Claire!

why do you choose to preach the path of reasoning?

Claire Light: Because one day,

when i was only a small child,

within my reasoning i had a revelation;

It starts with, what can i do for me?

Security, knowledge, nourishment,

Next question was, what can i do for elses?

Security, knowledge, nourishment,

For me, i inherited my security, my knowledge, my nourishment,

furthermore, i continue to develop this security, this knowledge, this nourishment,

then this newly developed security, knowledge, nourishment is passed unto the next generation,

Then, i asked myself, what if i asked somebody else, somebody not blessed by the light of the path of reasoning,

And that was the answer that made me preach the path of reasoning,

So elses would have an aportunity, for it was clear,

the insecurity, the fear, the overall pettyness of the common folk,

it all happens because of the lack of reason behind their thoughts, their words, their actions,

so i preach, so that they would like to learn, to become better, to be better,

so i teach, so that there will be a better tomorrow.

Iir: You do know there are more paths than that of reason,

again the reasoning only follows its foundations, right, wrong.

If i have to be the one to say it, i will say it,

for what you want you could also use the path of control,

Many times justified before by a will of a greater deed.

In the end, what is really important? what you desire? what others desire?

It is the constant collision of these ruled by the control of a taught reasoning what you see,

Is this, what you think is truth, the only truth?

Simlifying things for its understanding is a common think to do,

What you should really ask yourself is,

Is your reasoning really control? who is to confirm that? reason itself? others?

Definition, to define oneself and to difine others, this should develop reasoning,

but to have a definition of others first you need exposure and exposure leads to insecurity,

So people build walls, walls for themselves and walls for others,

Is your reasoning really right? Do these others really deserve to be freed from their walls?

Are you right? or are you just righteouss?

Claire Light: You do say some things...

Now we have arrived, i live with my sisters,

And all of them belong to the high sacred reasoning circles,

So how about, we finish this conversation later?

Iir: Whatever, You just seemed nice enough,

I just thought you should know.


from all that was,
to all, that is,
the end

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