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Her presence I ever relish
To be with her is my wish
She is absolutely stylish
She cancels my anguish

When she leaves the place
Deepest sorrow only I face
Happiness, I cannot trace
As pleasing are her ways

Her absence is veritable hell
As it makes me severely dull
Due to it, I feel badly unwell
My sadness, I seriously tell

When she utters a word
Great joy is delivered
I become a free bird
God's quotes are heard

Her love, I ever need
My life, she must lead
My ideas, she must read
She is my darling indeed.

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