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Walking on the Danforth
November the tenth.

Now the night falls so soon
It comes with a chill in the air
I glimpsed at the time
And thought to myself:
What's wrong with this picture?

Could it be that lovely yellow moon
That big China moon
Way, way up there
Yet feeling so near
Reminds me of the person
I had beside
On a night so similar..
Only warmer?

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