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Reckoned I’d write a bit o’ rhymin’ in the cowboy vein;
it slipped outta my lasso and I couldn’t take the rein.

So then I tries my hand at rap
But, white as sand, pheel like a sap
An’, like debates Republicanned, it was all a bunch a cr*p.

Freely versed New Yorkers’
obfuscated, seasonal frame;
still the acorn froze despite the early thaw
that sighed through the Alphabet Jungle.

Minimalism
sucked.

Haiku too proved too
easily misunderstood,
or pretty petty.

Couldn’t
Conquer
Complete
Concrete.

Acrostic
Couldn’t
Really
Offer
Something
That
I
Cherished.


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The quickest way for me to learn something new is to first understand why I'd like to learn it.


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The following comments are for "Why Sonnets?"
by Poeteye

That was fun...
Serious-ly funny Sonnet Man. What writing should be.

( Posted by: damifino [Member] On: November 28, 2011 )

stylistic failure
Thanks Richard. It's nice to be appreciated for what I can't do.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: November 28, 2011 )





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