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Between the fragrant candle held afront
And the prickled neck darkness behind
Stand I.
Alone with silence, yet some thing is nigh.
THERE! I dare, where trembled shadows dance.
What is this that becons shame
And fluttered lashes second glance?
A curse? Aye. A trance.A spell not given to wane.
Look Away!Look Away!
Don't be duped by man's bane.
Follow what leads you- The Warmth. The Light.
And live life eternal.(?)


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The following comments are for "Lime Light"
by damifino

Not A Parenthetical Matter
Why bracket your concerns in parentheses...?
Knowing there are no boundaries to eternity...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 23, 2013 )





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