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Living’s Curse

Many times through many lives I fought for freedom of the mind
As burdens made by living’s curse ensured restraint of freewill’s kind.
Then something found in search beyond the rampart walls of prison’s kind
Revoked the parapets unscaled to free the curse of limit’s mind.

Then arose from dungeon’s depth that once was bound by living’s curse
Free spirit with its wings unfurled where thoughts could soar in freedom’s verse.
Though many lifetimes I had walked denied the ways of freedom’s verse
Now unconfined by mind’s restraints I’m now released from living’s curse.

Walking now new paths illumed, as with new sight I am consumed.

Ivor G Davies


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The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.
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by ivordavies

Ivor's salvation.
Hi Ivor...I assume you meant writing poetry as a release...not that you discovered a miracle drug!!

That's what I consider God's miracle for me...giving me the (talent?) to write, so I wouldn't dwell on the burdens of life!

It's a refuge...a place to confide when loved ones and friends are no longer there for me.

You my friend...have been abundantly blessed!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 22, 2011 )





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