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He lives to grieve and believes
no one could possibly know
so he shares his rage
like a thug.
Onlookers shrug
as he rails at the sky,
shouts, ‘Why?”
Then he sobs
and kicks his dog.


Author's Note:
don't know why I wrote this - may have been 'inspired' by an alien


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"Tigers bloom where there's oodles of room." Zodiac Zoo


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