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If what I've done is love too much
too deep, and far too strong,
and languished in loves bitter touch
that stays with me too long
what hope have I to end in me
this love, to let it die?
When I know it will always be
but can not tell you why.

To hide it or to let it show
decisions of the heart,
when you've already seen and know
and did right from the start.
If all I've had is too much pain
whenever you are near
and let it show time and again
love that won't disappear
what hope have I of ending it?
Does real love ever die?
And so I let it show a bit
but cannot tell you why.

If all I've done is think on you
each minute of each day
and write your name a time or two
what hope is that some way
this love will ever cease to be
just stop? Just simply die?
This love that life has given me
but did not tell me why.

Fort Knox, KY

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The following comments are for "TELL ME WHY"
by veebdosa

Seven Billion

There are 7 Billion people in the world


Divide it by a hundred if there were equal amounts at each age


Divide it by 2 if there are equal men and women


Thats a bad estimate of how many women are the same age as you

I suppose if you divide it by the percentage of married/unmarried

then English Speaking v other languages

then divide it by locations

Statistics might just prove that you have Blown your only chance at Love.....

As for me. I reckon it's the "Must Have Theory"

If you cant have something..... that is exactly the thing you think you cant live without...

I have the Fish Theory......

Plenty more of them in the sea.....

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: November 18, 2011 )

Row Row Your Boat
I swear you are talking circles around me. What are you talking about? Is this the new Algebra? I understand about the incontenence just fine, though I have nevcer experienced and am pushing 73. But it only took me being 32 years old to realize that Sex Sux Big is a massive and total brainwashing.

I read the biography of the guy who wrote a popular song during WWII, I forget the song and his name, but he told the story about a young lady rowing a boat from Switzerland to Germany on a lake, picking him up and then rowing him to freedom in Switzerland. Her reward? He swears he had her jumped and screwed sexually before they got half way across the lake,

This is the kind of brainwashing I am talking about. I will probably remember his name and the name of the song right after I click Submit. Damn. That is where my 73 clicks in. LOL

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: November 18, 2011 )

Hello Sailor

Or the sailor who smuggled the young lass aboard for the free trip (and free sex) to Australia... She found out after a month that she was on the Dover / Ostend channel ferry line.

Think about it boys toys are Cars Motorcycles (airplanes for the rich) Maybe guns if you hadn't been put off them for life after being in the forces...

Then the girls have Toyboys and other plastic stuff...... err hairdryers rollers etc

Life is certainly fun

Never pissed the bed since puberty !!!!!!!! Now that is some record

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: November 18, 2011 )

from Mucha Ado About Nothing
Ok the song is SPEAK LOW IF YOU SPEAK LOVE, leading lines form Shakespears MUCH ADO, the lyric I think was Ogden NaSH, and the melody by Kert Wein who was the German Jew who nailed the girl in the middle of the lake, the song was a big hit for Ella Fitztzgerald and Billy Holiday. But it was never a really big hit, and not a very good song.

BTW, he later married her and it lasted many years.

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: November 18, 2011 )

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