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Love ended today.
A matter of words,
An off hand glance,
My world crashed down...
Standing in a helpless trance

You are my love..
I know no other..
Your love made me complete ...
Now broken apart.
My feelings in retreat.

What happened?!
Where did you go?!
Just yesterday side by side..
Now confusion and pain.
My heart dead, was it a lie?

Oh God, Someone tell me what to do!
Turn left...
Turn right...
I have nothing left.
I want to flee into the night..

Love ended today
Was it a dream?
Was it here?
It must have happened
Because this pain is just too real..

My Love ended today.

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