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WET DREAMS
I know not why your love's evading me,
nor what to do, so that your heart can see,
that passion grows no matter what I do,
and makes my heart to keep on loving you,
though all it's brought is pure insanity.

In dreams I've wept, but kept on loving you,
and tears, they flowed, no matter what I do,
I tried to take my burning love in hand
but it's a thing my heart can't understand,
and sleep won't tell what love is coming to.

If I could dream the dream both night and day,
I'd spend my life just sleeping where I lay,
and waking from the dream in burning sweat,
I lie content, and feel my hand is wet,
from love you've given me, in your own way.

------
VeeBdosa
Fort Knox, KY


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The following comments are for "WET DREAMS"
by VEEBDOSA

Incontinence

I was trying to categorize your poem but just decided it was "Taking the Piss"


Admit it Veeb you posted this as "Bait for Me"

One often can get too revealing
when trying it out with the hand
Dad made me wash down the ceiling
after missing the girl I planned

I support Age Concern...

As you get old the bladder gets week
sometimes the mouth will blubber
Dont be an old fool make it a rule
to cover the auld mattress in rubber

No drinks after nine PM is right
not lay in a puddle of stinking pee
As you dream deep dreams at night
just beware of the toilets you see


On the other hand growing old is a bloody nuisance I have never ever heard a girl call out

Slower Slower Softer Softer

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: November 17, 2011 )





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