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trekking self forms path
remote experiences
journey of return

11 November 2011

below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011

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The following comments are for "heading check"
by Bobby7L

and so it goes...
enjoyed here as elsewhere bobby ;-)

( Posted by: cmsmuse [Member] On: November 12, 2011 )

back to..?
leaving one jungle..returning to another kind, perhaps..

reference: "blushing monkey (up a slippery tree)"

thank you

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 13, 2011 )

self forms
As is my usual custom, I am going to subject this to my interpretation.

Made me think of someone waking from a dream, groggy-eyed before a committee. A meeting (of minds) perhaps, where someone who's heard it all dozes off.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: November 21, 2011 )

deconstruction of self
transcending mundane
yield of discovery


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 21, 2011 )

Used Sunlight
Well. If there is a glint of light reflected from broken glass, it most certainly is not moon light, because there is no such thing as moonlight. Maybe used sunlight, or sunlight bounced off of the surface of the moon, but in no way is it moonlight. Cherkhov had it all wrong, as usual because the moon can not shine...he was such a Cherk anyways.

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: November 21, 2011 )

Per usual, Ronnie,
you show your ass.* Chekhov said, "Don't tell me the moon is shining.." He was advising the writer to avoid the cliche (as poetic license).

Check my latest lyric/song, over on Fb- "an angel's song"..posted it a couple hours ago; already has a twenty+ comment thread.

*In your agitated state, I guess you forgot to mention my actual offering.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 21, 2011 )

show of asses
Robert, why haven't you blocked him?

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: November 21, 2011 )

I did block veebdosa/Ronnie Wilson, for a period of time.
Then, like I used to do when managing a pub, I let him back in (for a second chance).

I did delete his second comment, here.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 21, 2011 )

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