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Charmed eyes reflect on these letters
tainted with the tears of her perfume;
to Violet's bloom, secret viewer.
Charmed eyes, reflect on these letters
from Aphrodite's nymph, to her lover.
Before daybreak, can you feel her gloom?
Charmed eyes, reflect on these letters
tainted with the tears of her perfume.





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Ailill


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The following comments are for "Violet's Bloom"
by Ailill

triolet?
A charming title for a triolet .. I've written a Violet triolet as well but mine is based on a little girl who's name is Violet.
Hope you won't find me posting this here intrusive. If you do - feel free to delete it.


Triolet for Violet

Sweet Violet, with no shades of shy.
She sparkles in frilly dresses.
Spicy hearts, deep dish cherry pie.
Sweet Violet, with no shades of shy.
Candy apple of her motherís eye.
Curlicues of golden tresses.
Sweet Violet, with no shades of shy.
She sparkles in frilly dresses.

04/07/2004
Penelope Allen

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: October 30, 2011 )





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