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I won't know my chakras
when I'm drunk even if
I do yoga nidra
and fool myself
consuming a peg or two

read dissertation on stylistics
and comment on what is not done

it's still the ego that dominates
and I think I'm great fool


R K Singh

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by R.K.Singh

All chakra'd out
Reads like it was written in that brief moment when anger clouds one's judgement. Nicely done, Professor Singh.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: October 31, 2011 )

flashes of brilliance/humility
I truly was enchanted with this snap-shot. Made me smile about the truth we accept about ourselves - some more often than not.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: October 31, 2011 )

of knowing ourselves
shards of ego are good for the soul, but when you've reached the point of foolery, life's lessons will keep you alive, if your ego doesn't get you killed first.

Good stuff, this.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: November 1, 2011 )

Thanks pablowilliams, Pen, and toscano for reading the poem and sharing your comments. I feel humbled.

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: November 22, 2011 )

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