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The first three letters of Unity reads U-n-I,
Not she and him nor his and mine.
Come to me and shake my hand,
And I'll take you to the promised land.
We are the teeth of a comb-
As prevailing as the waves' foam
Help each other and I'll help too;
There ya go.. T-y = Thank you

George Gardashian

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