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Your Ways Of Love
So many ways your love is real
I couldn't bring my heart to know
nor think upon each one I feel
so many, and they come and go
to make my mind a carousel
all dizzy with your love I swell;

I lay my kiss upon your lips
before my mind can dwell on it
then touch you with my finger tips
'for my poor heart would feign a bit
in desperation and my need
upon your ways of love, I feed;

in silence you set my heart free
with just one warm and velvet touch
then all the ways that you love me
are plain to me--I need so much
of ev'ry way your love can be
and you will get the same from me.

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VeeBdosa
Fort Knox, KY


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by veebdosa

Isn't it...
GRAND!

( Posted by: damifino [Member] On: October 27, 2011 )





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