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My dearest only one daughter
Learn the value of jolly laughter
Behave with all by being softer
Prayer is the best mood-lifter

When we have deep trouble
We must not feel damn feeble
Our efforts we must double
By following all great people

In case we many times lose
Retreating, never at all choose
Only tears, worry will produce
Courage alone always rescues

Behave by being always confident
Let your mood be ever excellent
Through an idea that is brilliant
God helps those who are valiant

Your dad is not a millionaire
But, he is also not a liar
He works like a vehicle-tier
He truly loves you my dear

Only few things he can afford
He can offer the kindest word
Necessaries will be delivered
Enough love will be transferred

In case you take efforts truly
You will be rewarded surely
God will rescue you duly
Time is offered to us newly

If you weep and go back
And if guts you sadly lack
And if you plan to be slack
How can success you track?

My child, be brave and active
Do something highly creative
Learn in life to be ever positive
The best alone, to all, you give

I am not at all World-famous
Again I am not in life notorious
Contentment is really glorious
"Hard-work wins" is obvious.

With love, Yours affectionately,




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The following comments are for "Letter to my Daughter"
by mvvenkataraman

Well done
I truly enjoyed reading this - especially because of the connection not being mother to daughter. Fathers can be invaluable guides too. I know because I was blessed with a father who taught me valuable lessons.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: October 21, 2011 )

Money grows on trees

Reminds of the well known

no fun, send mon, your Son!
So sad too bad your dad

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: October 21, 2011 )

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