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clap clap

put the thriller down
in your head
a fo' sho' shot

bad bones
the other guy's drones

clap clap

like crash test dummies

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external validation

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under suspicion
of intended sense

surveil the chaos
over the fence

clap clap

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the other guy's drones
spitting bad bones

clap clap

today's reality

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the other guy's drones

clap clap

clap clap


1 October 2011

below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011

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The following comments are for "g"
by Bobby7L

out of step
Hey padrone - this one word "disambiguation" seems slightly out of place. My mind went, immediately, to 'disfiguration' and I had to correct myself.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: October 18, 2011 )

clap clap
of process..

on one level: through our representations..there is "external validation" [as at a writer's site].

"disambiguation" may or may not follow, as communication isn't always followed by understanding..or even intended:

"under suspicion
of intended sense"

Slingin' slang..changing meanings..

"clap clap" of hands, releasing birds to warn others..

or gunshots.."tagging"..

we sling our words

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 18, 2011 )

clap, clap!
Let the birds fly! enjoyed Bobby...

( Posted by: cmsmuse [Member] On: October 18, 2011 )

Crash Test Poet
It is the Golden Drone
That sets the tone...
And slays the ambiguous dragon
It goes something like rat-a-tat-tat

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 18, 2011 )

spitting bad bones
on point..

"tagging/like crash test dummies"..on one level, a facebook reference


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 18, 2011 )

Bobby, I don't know, I just do not know. I have read this at least 10 times, twice out loud and it had something going as I heard it. I am also going to record it this morning, and why all the fuss? Because I am anxious to find something in and out of it.

I have to be honest, I just don't get it. The one thing that makes sense to me is your mention of today's reality, am I getting warm?

That and "rat-a-tat-tat" maybe you could add some "rat-a-tat-tat" to it a couple places or something. Now that would work for me.

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: October 19, 2011 )

"That's the fact, Jack."
of cadence..a drive-by joint/offering..

I've manipulated some slang..and made some:

"the other guy's drones"

Have you ever heard a rap-off?

"spit"- as in recite, have at it..

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 19, 2011 )

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