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sound beneath foot
beyond brilliant white

weathered mosaic
in vague reflection

imprecise magnesium

crushed zinc
and calcium

in deflection

grain to grain
away from focus

or holding fragrance
as when appearing whole

in stationary

14-15 September 2011

below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011

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The following comments are for "kaolin"
by Bobby7L

Mud God
From the mystic mud the clayman rises
In an act of unearthly Love

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 17, 2011 )

slingin' mud
on one level-
of vehicle [vessel] becoming path..

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 17, 2011 )

people who live in mud huts should throw pots
Let me count the ways ...

1. It changes colours with a chameleon's alacrity while continuing its grasp of veracity,

2. It celebrates brevity which sorta rhymes with alacrity and veracity so I'm delighted all over again.

3. It convinces me I don't know what it's all about until I reach the end which convinces me I knew all along.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: October 18, 2011 )

white noise
A decade ago, I smashed several damaged pieces of fine kaolin pottery [acquired from Jakarta, while an importer with my brother]- forming a pathway through a display area of our architectural wares. Each step resulted in change..

On one level, a metaphorical offering..

Thanks for lookig within.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: October 18, 2011 )


This has placed me in an ebullient mood, for sure.

Still reading. Still learning.

I remain close.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: November 1, 2011 )

of kaolin
there's a mask well as a falling apart, without going to pieces..

whether buildings/vessels/bodies..temporary vehicles

Thank you

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: November 1, 2011 )

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