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keep still my heart
amidst scorching fire
the three handed man
shall soon be naught

upon his flight
the fire is withered
the earth\'s might
infinitely shattered

keep still my heart
when by tempest tossed
even the storms take rest
unto their graves

all will come to pass
the sun, moon and the stars
Keep still my heart
Lo! your Master descend from the clouds

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~piggy~

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by piggyjc

Look Into the Flame
We burn our lives...
On the fires that our Hearts build

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 12, 2011 )





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