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I used to think it selfish
To up and kill oneself.
What scares me is so much now
Is I thought about it myself.
I understand the feeling.
I understand the pain.
Because I get the feeling
That I have nothing to gain.
So you hung yourself.
The world just got too dark.
But I know that for me
There's a light to light the dark.
Yes, I morn your death.
More then you'll understand.
A stranger with a fight.
You gave it up,
But I'm still here.
I will fight it right.
Please, go in peace.
My friend.
We'll find it in the end.

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