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she was found in an empty box
shedding invisible tears
filling the air
and broken vessels

like Pandora, but worse
her hollow is visible
she invades within
and destroys the whole

she echoes the saddest ode
that pierces through shrilling silence
as she invades the bleeding heart,
the wounded soul.

who can escape her?
whose mere presence is an irony?
none can deny
her existence is a paradox.

if you know her,
she must be in you.
if you don't
she will be.


When you write... just write.

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by piggyjc

My Personal Abyss
While peering into the pit of emptiness
I dropped my flashlight...
And it never made a sound

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 12, 2011 )

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