There's Poo on My Shoe Too
Well that's not true Ron...your piece entitled "Artist" is no stinker. It's a work of art. I read it often. But now that I have your attention via my attention grabbing subject line...every poem posted on this network deserves comment. It just doesn't happen enough. If you read it...acknowledge it...that's all.
Posted by: damifino [Member] On: October 13, 2011
I came back here to check on your response as I'm wont to do and of course .. being a reader .. I read your poem again and ... holy hannah!
If you don't know me by now and there's no earthly reason why you should ... I am a rampant rhymer ... I kinda like alliteration too ... heh heh ....
I never caught your rhyme sequence until just now! That's an excellent skill to be so effortless with a rhyme that even a sharp eyed rhyming fool misses it .. or maybe my mind was somewhere else? Nope ... not at all. Take another bow!