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We inhabit the future
In an unfolding manner...
Making cut-out dolls
Of the Daily Planner...

� G.Dean Stevens

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The following comments are for "An Unfolding Manner"
by awhippingflame

And then...
"they"want us to lie flat for puppy puddles and more

( Posted by: damifino [Member] On: October 5, 2011 )

Shyster in Chief
Steve Jobs. May he resist in peace, alongside of his obvious mentor, PT Barnum, who also believed that there is a sucker born every minute.

Seems today, there is also a shyster born every minute. Begin with a iPod case that costs all of a dime to manufacture, and people line up to purchase it for $49.98 with 12% off on Tuesdays.

Pathetic, but now maybe Apple can really do something worth buying.

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: October 6, 2011 )

Witty. Intelligent. Whimsical. Fun. Good work!

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: March 6, 2012 )

Not the creators Intention

( Posted by: Zeus [Member] On: April 22, 2016 )

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