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In this vivid state of extreme mental awareness
Slowly spiraling towards dripping madness stroke
I can see translucent beings transpiring throughout
Every pore that reality opens to absolute power
Mixing and melting, connecting strings, flying
Into all mater and space, constantly driving forth
Past or future through any present time starlapse
Irradiating from the giant heart that beats inside us


Inside the variable point connecting all galaxies
Hauling fingers linger on the outskirts of obscurity
Pushing forth liquid motion through old arteries
Making and breaking with single circular radiation
The delicate fabric of constantly fluctuating light
Encompassing sense and simplicity in atoms of flesh
Glorious on every pulse of molten fury cascading in
This hole universe, inspiring, breeding time and space


Scream desire on the highest peak a moment offers
To perturbing eyes burning holes inside of atoms
Captured by twinkling ears bound around sound
Splitting reality’s signs of obscurity and remembrance
Embrace future while past fury rumbles and flickers
Ascend towards golden descent in gore and amber
As sudden collision impales dream into mutiny spirit
New realms of haunting inside your cavity lavishly open

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The following comments are for "Honestly Hollow"
by Paradox

Black Heart
No light escapes the vastness...of an empty Soul
Where the destructive nature of a hollow Heart...
Is compared to that of an all-consuming...Black Hole

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 4, 2011 )

Excellent verses right there. It's true, although in the meantime I've moved further. I'm always glad to provide inspiration. This was in fact the motive for writing this...

( Posted by: Paradox [Member] On: October 4, 2011 )

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